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What if my story about this fox demon became a manga? Well, here you can see what it might look like! (read from right to left, also 
)
Also, I am aware of my quirk to want to put too much information in one page, like in the last two panels, where the fox demon (Tokoto Itaru-kun) suddenly seems to want to fight a demon on another building that doesn't seem to exist in panel 1. This is merely because the page needs to be a synopsis of the whole story, so the demon really needs to be in there. I split the panel at the bottom in two in the hope it will be read as not being at the same place. Also, the fox demon might not be at the same place as in panel 1 altogether, again my annoying speed in telling a story being a bit too fast....
Well, I have learned a lot from creating this page. I've also learned how not to make a page. But yeah, it was good enough to fool my mom, brother and best friends into thinking it was a professional mangapage. F*** Yeah!
::Made with::
-Manga Studio 4 EX
-WACOM bamboo
Please do not copy or trace character or art. Thanks :3
)Also, I am aware of my quirk to want to put too much information in one page, like in the last two panels, where the fox demon (Tokoto Itaru-kun) suddenly seems to want to fight a demon on another building that doesn't seem to exist in panel 1. This is merely because the page needs to be a synopsis of the whole story, so the demon really needs to be in there. I split the panel at the bottom in two in the hope it will be read as not being at the same place. Also, the fox demon might not be at the same place as in panel 1 altogether, again my annoying speed in telling a story being a bit too fast....
Well, I have learned a lot from creating this page. I've also learned how not to make a page. But yeah, it was good enough to fool my mom, brother and best friends into thinking it was a professional mangapage. F*** Yeah!
::Made with::
-Manga Studio 4 EX
-WACOM bamboo
Please do not copy or trace character or art. Thanks :3
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactOverall it looks very professional, but something about his arm and hand bugs me, in the second last panel, where he holds his sword against the demon... :/ And as for the distance between the two of them, in the last panel; maybe you could just draw them, standing on the same rooftop, but still devide it into two panels? That, or give him a seriously long sword! xD
Oh and I like it, how the demon is wearing normal clothes, though, if you look at the arm, it seems like the shirt and the arm kinda turns into the same thing, as there's not really any sleeves. It's hard to tell, where the shirt stops and the arm begins... And it kinda seems, like the demon is smiling or even has no facial expression at all, while being nearly punctured in the lung... xD
But besides that, it's very beautifully detailed and dynamic, not to tell how amazing the shading is! ^__^ And I absolutely adore the flames, you've got nothing that I wanna change there! :'D